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SONG NAME: NJ-ANTHEM
SONG WRITER: GALLUCH1215
STYLE: DEATH METAL/GRINDCORE

This is my first song I’ve ever written. I’m not a big fan of the vocals in grindcore or black metal but I love playing blast beats and faster single stroke rolls. I don’t have a double bass pedal yet but I can do fast single. Once I find a guitarist to play with and a sound recording video camera I’ll make a video and expand the song.

KEY:
sn: Snare
c1: Crash 1
c2: Crash 2
rd: Ride
bs: Bass
t1: Tom 1
ft: Floor Tom

ACCENT KEY:
#: Cymbal Choke
: Bell Hit
f: Flam

INTRO:
  |                |RLRLRLRLRLRLRLRL|                |
c1:----------------|----------------|x---x---x---#---|
rd:+-+-+-+-+-+-+-++|----------------|----------------|
sn:----------------|oooooooooooo----|----------------|
t1:----------------|------------oooo|----------------|
bs:o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-|----------------|o---o---o---o---|

VERSE:
  |       X3       |                |       X3       |
c1:--------------xx|---------------x|--------------xx|
c2:----------------|---------------x|----------------|
rd:x-x-x-x-x-x-x---|----------------|x-x-x-x-x-x-x---|
sn:o-o-o-o-o-o-o-oo|o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-|o-o-o-o-o-o-o-oo|
ft:----------------|-o-o-o-o-o-o-o--|----------------|
bs:o-o-o-o-o-o-o-oo|o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-|o-o-o-o-o-o-o-oo|



Your judgment is greatly appreciated. This is my first song so it would be very helpful to tell me how to write tabs and write our music. I know it looks boring but when played really fast it sounds good. This is obviously not finished but if anyone's interested I'll post the full song and if I can find someone to come up with some good guitar then I'll make a video or record it.








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I think its a great start. I can see where tempo would make ithave "sense". I have never read tabs, but its clear enough once you study it and read the key. Smile








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Where can you find a program to write tabs?







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I can see you've put some time into that! Good work.

You know if you can write tabs you should probably have a go at learning real music! It's not that much different, just involves learning a couple of key things.

Check Alan's thread on reading music for more!








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It satrts pretty good but i cant read tabs







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not bad at all man.
keep metal Mr. Green








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